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Oliver wrote a line in the Moleskine tonight that didn't make me wince, first line of the middle that's done that: 'did she know, did she know I was going to be a person who did this.' read it back four times, didn't wince, walked home without opening it. that's the rule.

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Mark Hayes

the middle's the hard part. good line, Ollie.

Oliver Brennan → Mark Hayes

cheers mark. 200 more to write.

Amara Williams

the wince test is brutal and I deeply respect it. also that line is a banger and I won't be taking questions.

Meera Rathore

Ollie I read that line three times. the way 'did she know' repeats. it does something to me. this is the one. so proud of you.

Park Seo-yeon

the walking home without opening it part. that kind of restraint is its own kind of courage.

Daria van Niekerk

sorry, two days with no signal in the Alentejo. but this line. the way 'did she know' repeats. it reads like a prayer. this is the one Ollie.

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